I see my life in tatters, strewn around.
Falling down, each part animating itself
Into a queer little form;
Scampering away, looking around;
Amid the vast fabric of space and time,
Hardly recognizing their master,
And instantly gobbled up by a black-hole;
But not before squeaking a metallic cry:
When are you going to die?
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Comments on: "When are you going to die?" (1)
The metaphysical energy of your poem is commendable….i dont think anyone else had expressed lost dreams in such a hysterical fashion…